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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 18:46:47 GMT 1
rett oki i'll get mine make a few nots and i'll post up help that you might need okiiieesss
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 18:47:18 GMT 1
LOL i'm a swot at heart to bad i'm so hrdcore to be a geek  |
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Post by princess666anne on Mar 2, 2008 18:49:47 GMT 1
Woooooo thank you  You are all so cool helping with coursework and stuff Yeah, I do expressive arts so I have to study The Cruicible, it made me cry. I can help people with it too (how cool, if you need help there are 2 people who know lots about it) I got either 8 or 9 or 10 out of 10 for it I can't remember which, that's what I got for all of the things I had to study for expressive arts |
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 18:52:39 GMT 1
right with this stoopid poem
what key points did your teacher leave you with?
because he/she should have told you exactly what needs to be written
and what it was you were lookin for
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Post by princess666anne on Mar 2, 2008 19:01:04 GMT 1
She gave me the question, and that is all, so I'm guessing I have to write about the use of language and structure in creating memorable characters So I'm going to write about structure, language, and characters |
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 19:03:46 GMT 1
it's structure is 56 lines
1 stanza
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Post by princess666anne on Mar 2, 2008 19:09:03 GMT 1
what does that show? does it show how he loves her so much he isn't taking breath becuase it would mean stoppig talking about her? that's just a stab in the dark, this poem confuses me sooo much haha |
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 19:13:38 GMT 1
it would show that he wants to get the point across and judgin by the lines
"looking as if she were alive"
she's either
A) Dead
B) Not Real
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 19:14:54 GMT 1
the rhyme scheme is
AABBAABB
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 19:16:15 GMT 1
and there is also alot of Enjambemant
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Post by princess666anne on Mar 2, 2008 19:20:56 GMT 1
wooooooo thanks you're mint i have enough to write my essay now *is happy* |
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 19:23:20 GMT 1
glad i could help  see swot me! |
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Post by princess666anne on Mar 2, 2008 19:25:51 GMT 1
ok i changed my mind
i need a quote to show love/hate relationships
i found notes miss gave us and it says one of the themes is a love/hate relationship
it says that for 2 of the poems we hve to write about, so i ned to write about it for comparison
any ideas for a quote?
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Post by Aerrow [: on Mar 2, 2008 19:33:00 GMT 1
try lines 36 to 41
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Post by princess666anne on Mar 2, 2008 19:35:42 GMT 1
thank you i picked my quote i'm using "the curtain i have drawn for you" from line 10 and i'm basically saying he does stuff for her but he batters her head in so hes oinly doing it to be rid of her it's wrong, but it looks like i tried and if i get it wrong miss will help me:D |
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coz you love me 
You are all so cool helping with coursework and stuff 